First draft down, it feels so good to have this stage wrapped up. There is so much missing, I think, but I cannot include absolutely everything. It's an education piece AND an entertainment, I m at once fearful of being didactic, but then I need to make the point of each segment clear. Clear to understand not only WHO and WHAT (these most concerned Daniel - we don't want to confuse the audience) but also WHY. Not the characters' WHY, but mine. Why are we doing this? Why vampires? What is the point?
I think I have that, or at least enough to get the ball rolling.